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    Speech is almost done, just need to iron out the little things. Let me know if you think anything is missing or should be changed.

    Topic: The licensed carrying of a handgun is beneficial to the overall safety of both the individual and the public, and should be permitted everywhere.
    Written by John H. Nov. 2009

    Introduction

    The carrying of a handgun by a private citizen is an issue that is hotly contested throughout the United States. Advocates on both sides constantly lobby for the laws governing the issue to be changed in their favor. Some opponents to concealed carry, such as John Shanks of the Ohio Coalition Against Gun Violence, argue that “immediate access and availability enhances chances for firearms violence…a situation that would not normally result in deadly violence can be tragic.” However, statistics prove conclusively that the reported murder rate is significantly lower in states which allow carrying than those which do not, even taking into account population differences. While some form of handgun carry is legal in most states, public perception of those who choose to do so remains deplorably warped. The licensed carrying of a handgun by law-abiding citizens in beneficial to the overall safety of both the individual and the public, and should be permitted in all places, including schools, banks, government buildings, and post offices. Colleges and universities in particular should allow legal handgun carry.


    Background Information


    First, some background information. Currently, 48 states offer some form of concealed carry license. 39 states offer a “shall-issue” permit, which means that officials must not deny the applicant a permit, unless they find reason to do so. Such reasons typically include having been convicted of a felony, such as domestic battery, or having a history of mental illness. The remaining nine states offer what is called “may-issue” permits. The laws of these states require that the applicant show a specific need. Some of these nine states are “shall-issue” in practice, such as Alabama and Connecticut, while others are “almost non-issue”. This means that in states such as New York and New Jersey, although the state law allows the issuance of permits, they are rarely handed out. The last two states, Vermont and Alaska, allow concealed carry without a license as a constitutional right. The only provisions are that the carrier is a non-felon at least of at least 16 or 21 years of age respectively.


    Murder by Numbers


    Looking at the figures gathered by the FBI’s Crime in the United States Report, we see that 14,180 people were slain in 2008. 924 homicides were committed during robbery and 87 during burglary. This includes store clerks, bank tellers, and home invasions. 19 murders resulted from car-jackings and 23 rape victims were killed by their attackers.
    This next set of data shows justifiable homicide figures for the past four years. I call your attention to the fine print at the bottom. “The killing of a felon, during the commission of a felon, by a private citizen.” That means that in 2008, 161 people were thrust into life threatening situations and had made the choice not to be a victim. Most importantly, they had the ability to protect themselves from an otherwise deadly fate.


    Defensive Handgun Use


    According to a study conducted by Dr. Gary Kleck, criminologists at Florida State University, there are approximately two million defensive gun uses in the US per year by law abiding citizens. This includes scaring off wrongdoers with the presence of a gun, as well as situations where the gun is actually used. These instances occur every day by people of all walks of life. The New York Times reported on August 13th of this year that a 72 year old Harlem store owner shot and killed two would-be robbers and wounded another two. He gave the crooks the money, and only drew his shotgun when they began pistol whipping one of his employees. In May 2004, Indianapolis pizza delivery man Ronald B. Honeycutt was beset by an armed (and unlicensed) who intended to rob him at gunpoint. He drew his own pistol and dispatched the threat. Two months before in Northern Indiana, Daniel L. Floyd shot his neighbor after the neighbor approached him swinging an ax handle, despite repeated requests by Floyd to stop. Both Honeycutt and Floyd were law abiding holders of handgun carry licenses, and protected themselves within the limits of the law. No charges were filed against either man.


    Compare and Contrast

    Let’s compare the statistics of New Jersey and South Dakota, two states with vastly different views on gun control.New Jersey is a state which has restrictive, suffocating legislature, tedious and exhaustive purchasing procedures which deter most law abiding citizens from purchasing a handgun. According to a study by CQ Press in 2008, New Jersey ranked 20th in the country as safest state based on murder rates. New Jersey is a “may-issue state”, however, their prohibitive views on concealed carry prevents most citizens from obtaining a permit. In 2008, despite their tough gun laws, there were 376 murders. Of those 376 murders, 236 were perpetrated using firearms. Of the 236 firearm-related murders, 202 of them were with handguns, according to the FBI CIUS. Obviously, keeping handguns out of the hands of citizens hasn’t slowed their use in crimes. New Jersey has not published their statewide percentage of CC permit holders.
    Now we’ll take a look at South Dakota. South Dakota is ranked 5th safest state in terms of murder rates, and is a “shall-issue” state. They also boast the highest percentage of permit holders, with 7.45% of the population being armed. Predictably, their murder rates were far lower, at 22 in 2008. Of the 22 homicides, 13 used firearms. And of those 13 firearm-related murders, only 4 involved the use of a handgun.
    Let’s not forget Vermont. One of only two states in which no carry license is required, Vermont is even safer than South Dakota ranking in at 4th safest state. Their murder rate is 17 total. 8 of their 17 murders were with firearms, and only 4 were with handguns. It would seem that not requiring a license for Vermonters works fairly well for them.
    Of course, any opponent of concealed carry would waste no time in pointing out that the 2008 populations of New Jersey (8,682,661) and South Dakota (804,194) are vastly different, thus rendering these facts unusable. However, if South Dakota had the population of New Jersey, they would have had 238 murders total (rounded up) in 2008. That is 138 less murders than New Jersey’s 376 total, whose gun laws are significantly more stringent than South Dakota. If we did the math just using the handgun numbers, South Dakota would have only 44 murders caused by handguns, 158 less than New Jersey’s 202. 138 or 158 less lives lost is a very important number, and that allowing law-abiding citizens to carry in a state like New Jersey certainly can’t hurt their dismal violent crime rate.


    Police Response Times


    Police officers make every effort to respond to calls as quickly as possible. However, they must first be called, then get in their cars, and then drive to the scene. This all takes precious time. A woman being accosted by a potential rapist in an alley doesn’t have time to take out her cell phone, call police, giver her location and wait patiently for police to find her. Let’s take a look at a report from the Department of Justice’s Bureau of Justice Statistics. Here we can see that for violent crimes including robbery, aggravated assault and simple assault, police response time, on average, was 27.5 percent within the first 5 minutes, 34 percent 6-11 minutes, and 25.5 percent 11 minutes-an hour.
    These chilling numbers raise the question, “what can happen in the first 5 minutes?” Very likely, the victim would have already been beaten or robbed, perhaps killed, by the time police are able to arrive. I ask you to examine this next set of data, conducted by the FBI Crime in the US report. This shows the number of homicides deemed justifiable by the law. However, I ask that you look again at the text at the bottom of the table. It reads, “The killing of a felon, during the commission of a felony, by a private citizen.” These numbers represent real, law-abiding citizens who only used their firearms to stop someone bent on taking their life. As citizens of the United States, we have the right to protect our lives and property. Not everyone chooses be armed, but proponents of concealed carry advocate the choice to do so if one wishes, as well as to not be judged for their decision to defend themselves.


    Gun Free Zones


    Although most states do allow some form of carry, places called “gun-free zones” were established with the Crime Control Act of 1990. In such zones, the law requires citizens to disarm before entering the premises. Some examples of gun-free zones are; government buildings such as post offices and capitol buildings; public events like state fairs and sports events, elementary and secondary schools, preventing teachers from carrying licensed firearms in case of an emergency. The phrase “going postal” has been popularized in American slang, but has a deadly origin. The phrase is derived from at least 20 workplace rage incidents at post offices from 1983 onward. These are all cases in which postal workers have shot and killed their managers, fellow workers, and members of the police or general public. Most university and college regulations also prohibit carrying concealed weapons on campus.
    The problem with areas such as this is that only those who obey the law will disarm. An individual seeking to do harm will enter such an area with the comforting knowledge that encountering armed opposition will be unlikely. The lack of rationality by lawmakers in this department has had fatal consequences over the years.


    Columbine and Virginia Tech


    Two schools in particular suffered from the flawed logic of gun-free zones. The Columbine High School and Virginia Tech University Massacres are the two worst school shootings in US history. The 1999 Columbine Massacre, lasting less than an hour, resulted in thirteen people killed and 24 wounded at the hands of Harris and Klebold. Since high schools are gun free zones, there were no armed teachers or administrators who may have been able to stop the duo’s terrible actions. Seung-Hui Cho, the perpetrator of the 2007 Virginia Tech Massacre, killed 33 people singlehandedly, injuring an additional 23. His rampage lasted from 7:15am to 5:30pm. The reason he was able to roam the campus indiscriminately murdering innocent people for over 10 hours is that all of his victims were defenseless. Ken Stanton, a columnist for Virginia Tech’s Collegiate Times, Virginia Tech student, and administrator of the Students for Conceal Carry on Campus organization, told me that he estimates there are between 300-400 concealed carry permit holders who attend Virginia Tech. All it would have taken was one armed citizen and Cho’s wanton disregard for human life would have ended much sooner than ten hours, with a significantly lower death toll. Teachers at Columbine and students at Virginia Tech should not have been denied the ability to shoot these murderers to prevent them from spilling more blood. Instead, they had to wait until the violent murderers shot themselves for the carnage to end.
    Universities continue to be one of the gravest areas of concern, since unlike workplaces and government buildings; they are independently operated and highly public places. As opposed to high schools, college students over 21 are of age to carry, and many already hold permits to do so. However, due to senseless regulations enacted by universities, they are prohibited from having the means to defend themselves at any given time.


    Guns on Campuses


    The opponents to campus carry have an endless array of arguments against students carrying their legally licensed weapons at school. Let’s take a look at some of their favorite contentions:



    Guns on campus would lead to an escalation of crime:

    Carrying concealed weapons on campus has been permitted since fall 2006 at 20 campuses of nine public colleges in Utah, Colorado State University since 2003, and at the Blue Ridge Community College since 1996. With concealed carry allowed on these campuses for a combined total of 100 semesters, none of these schools has experienced a single incident of gun violence or accidents. Similarly, none of the state which permit carrying has seen an increase in gun violence since legalizing concealed carry, even though carriers wear their guns in places such as food stores, movie theaters, office buildings, shopping malls, churches, restaurants and banks. Furthermore, studies done at by University of Maryland professor John Lott and University of Georgia professor David Mustard, as well as those done by various state agencies, show that concealed license holders are five times less likely than non-license holders to commit violent crimes.


    A student with a gun could “snap” and go on a killing spree:

    According to a report by the Secret Service National Threat Assessment Center on the prevention of targeted violence in schools, the notion of a previously sane, well-adjusted person “snapping” into a violent frenzy is not supported by case evidence. The study concluded that a person’s descent towards violent acts is typically accompanied with numerous warning signs.


    Conclusion


    Most citizens who choose to carry a handgun are the opposite of wild, dangerous people. They are shown statistically to be more level headed than non-carrying people, and have proven this is practical terms by keeping their handguns on them every day, not using them unless they feel their lives are in immediate jeopardy. People who carry have a positive impact on their communities, not because they go looking for criminals trying to be police, but because they go about their day prepared to respond to those who intend to do them harm. They do this despite the fact that the population at large views them as crazy or paranoid. It would have been a blessing to have had an armed civilian at Virginia Tech or Fort Hood, or in any of the thousands of store robberies where clerks are killed each year. The presence of a private citizen with a handgun may not help stop violence 100% of the time, but there has never been a case where it hurt. Those of you who do not carry a gun should be thankful that there are people willing to shoulder that responsibility. If there is ever a day where you find yourself face to face with a criminal, sever seconds away from death, a good guy with a gun nearby can’t help but increase your chance to survive.
     

    ezdubbin97

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    Very well written. I may add, you might think of converting (or adding) the South Dakota New Jersey crime rate to percentages...it might have more impact. Great job! :yesway:
     

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    one of his employees. In May 2004, Indianapolis pizza delivery man Ronald B. Honeycutt was beset by an armed (and unlicensed) who intended to rob him at gunpoint. He drew his own pistol and dispatched the threat. Two months before in Northern In

    You left out a word. Insert the word of your choice. burglar, man, whatever. Also I agree with the post above, the first argument against your case is going to be that new jersey and south dakota have wildly different populations. It would probably help your case if you could find an example of two states that are closer, either in population or location.
     

    Phil502

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    You left out a word. Insert the word of your choice. burglar, man, whatever. Also I agree with the post above, the first argument against your case is going to be that new jersey and south dakota have wildly different populations. It would probably help your case if you could find an example of two states that are closer, either in population or location.

    I agree.


    Excellent work!
     

    glockjho15

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    Very nice work. Some minor grammar and spelling revisions and you are set to deliver. This looks like A+ work to me.
     

    Bill B

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    However, statistics prove conclusively that the reported murder rate is significantly lower in states which allow carrying than those which do not, even taking into account population differences.

    I would definitely use an in-text cite here. When people hear "statistics say/show/prove/whatever" they tune out.
    Something along the line of "The FBI Uniform Crime Report shows that...." of course use whatever the correct cite is for your source.
    Looks good.
     

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    IMHO, very well done! I hope that your work here will help others and their perception on gun carrying and ultimately make our country a little safer.
     

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    Very good. for a visual aid, maybe about 3 or 4 dozen of us should show up to watch your speech, and at the end, you can say "will anybody who has a LTCH please stand up?" :D

    You could list, specifically, places where people are not allowed to carry their personally owned firearms-Chicago (mall where people were killed) Ft Hood, Columbine, VA Tech, Luby's, Amish school in PA, etc... with the common thread being places where mass shootings occurred.
     
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    Speech is almost done, just need to iron out the little things. Let me know if you think anything is missing or should be changed.

    Topic: The licensed carrying of a handgun is beneficial to the overall safety of both the individual and the public, and should be permitted everywhere.
    Written by John H. Nov. 2009

    Introduction

    The carrying of a handgun by a private citizen is an issue that is hotly contested throughout the United States. Advocates on both sides constantly lobby for the laws governing the issue to be changed in their favor. Some opponents to concealed carry, such as John Shanks of the Ohio Coalition Against Gun Violence, argue that “immediate access and availability enhances chances for firearms violence…a situation that would not normally result in deadly violence can be tragic.” However, statistics (1) prove conclusively that the reported murder rate is significantly lower in states which allow carrying than those which do not, even taking into account population differences. While some form of handgun carry is legal in most states, public perception of those who choose to do so remains deplorably warped. The licensed carrying of a handgun by law-abiding citizens /in/ is beneficial to the overall safety of both the individual and the public, and should be permitted in all places, including schools, banks, government buildings, and post offices. Colleges and universities in particular should allow legal handgun carry.


    Background Information


    First, some background information. Currently, 48 states offer some form of concealed carry license. 39 states offer a “shall-issue” permit, which means that officials must not deny the applicant a permit, unless they find reason to do so. Such reasons typically include having been convicted of a felony, /such as/ being convicted of domestic battery (2), or having a history of mental illness. The remaining nine states offer what is called “may-issue” permits. The laws of these states require that the applicant show a specific need. Some of these nine states are “shall-issue” in practice, such as Alabama and Connecticut, while others are “almost non-issue This means that in states such as New York and New Jersey, although the state law allows even though their state laws allow the issuance of permits, they are rarely handed out issued. (3) The last two states, Vermont and Alaska, allow concealed carry without a license as a constitutional right. The only provisions are that the carrier is a non-felon at least of at least 16 or 21 years of age respectively.


    Murder by Numbers


    Looking at the figures gathered /by/ for (4) the FBI’s Crime in the United States Report, we see that 14,180 people were slain in 2008. 924 homicides were committed during robbery and 87 during burglary. This includes store clerks, bank tellers, and home invasions. 19 murders resulted from car-jackings and 23 rape victims were killed by their attackers.
    This next set of data shows justifiable homicide figures for the past four years. I call your attention to the fine print at the bottom. “The killing of a felon, during the commission of a felony, by a private citizen.” That means that in 2008, 161 people were thrust into life threatening situations and /had/ (5) made the choice not to be a victim. Most importantly, they had the ability to protect themselves from an otherwise deadly fate.


    Defensive Handgun Use


    According to a study (6) conducted by Dr. Gary Kleck, criminologists at Florida State University, there are approximately two million defensive gun uses in the US per year by law abiding citizens. This includes scaring off wrongdoers with the presence of a gun, as well as situations where the gun is actually used. These instances occur every day by people of all walks of life. The New York Times reported on August 13th of this year that a 72 year old Harlem store owner shot and killed two would-be robbers and wounded another two. He gave the crooks the money, and only drew his shotgun when they began pistol whipping one of his employees. In May 2004, Indianapolis pizza delivery man Ronald B. Honeycutt was beset by an armed (and unlicensed) ____ (7) who intended to rob him at gunpoint. He drew his own pistol and dispatched the threat. Two months before in Northern Indiana, Daniel L. Floyd shot his neighbor after the neighbor approached him swinging an ax handle, despite repeated requests by Floyd to stop. Both Honeycutt and Floyd were law abiding holders of handgun carry licenses, and protected themselves within the limits of the law. No charges were filed against either man.


    Compare and Contrast

    Let’s compare the statistics of New Jersey and South Dakota, two states with vastly different views on gun control.New Jersey is a state which has restrictive, suffocating legislature (8) legislation/laws, and tedious and exhaustive purchasing procedures which deter most law abiding citizens from purchasing a handgun. According to a study by CQ Press in 2008, New Jersey ranked 20th in the country as the safest state based on murder rates. New Jersey is a “may-issue state”, however, their prohibitive views on concealed carry prevents most citizens from obtaining a permit. In 2008, despite their tough gun laws, there were 376 murders. Of those 376 murders, 236 were perpetrated using firearms. Of the 236 firearm-related murders, 202 of them were with handguns, according to the FBI CIUS. Obviously, keeping handguns out of the hands of citizens hasn’t slowed their use in crimes. New Jersey has not published their statewide percentage of CC permit holders.
    Now we’ll take a look at South Dakota. South Dakota is ranked the 5th safest state in terms of murder rates, and is a “shall-issue” state. They also boast the highest percentage of permit holders, with 7.45% of the population being armed. Predictably, their murder rates were far lower, at 22 in 2008. Of the 22 homicides, 13 used firearms. And of those 13 firearm-related murders, only 4 involved the use of a handgun.
    Let’s not forget Vermont. One of only two states in which no carry license is required, Vermont is even safer than South Dakota ranking in /at/ as the 4th safest state. Their murder rate is 17 total. 8 of their 17 murders were with firearms, and only 4 were with handguns. It would seem that not requiring a license for Vermonters works fairly well for them.
    Of course, any opponent of concealed carry would waste no time in pointing out that the 2008 populations of New Jersey (8,682,661) and South Dakota (804,194) are vastly different, thus rendering these facts unusable. However, if South Dakota had the population of New Jersey, they would have had 238 murders total (rounded up) in 2008. That is 138 less murders than New Jersey’s 376 total, whose gun laws are significantly more stringent than South Dakota. If we did the math just using the handgun numbers, South Dakota would have only 44 murders caused by handguns, 158 less than New Jersey’s 202. 138 or 158 less lives lost is a very important number, and /that/ (9) allowing law-abiding citizens to carry in a state like New Jersey certainly can’t hurt their dismal violent crime rate.


    Police Response Times


    Police officers make every effort to respond to calls as quickly as possible. However, they must first be called, then get in their cars, and then drive to the scene. This all takes precious time. A woman being accosted by a potential rapist in an alley doesn’t have time to take out her cell phone, call police, give/r/ her location and wait patiently for police to find her. Let’s take a look at a report (10) from the Department of Justice’s Bureau of Justice Statistics. Here we can see that for violent crimes including robbery, aggravated assault and simple assault, police response times, on average, were 27.5 percent within the first 5 minutes, 34 percent within 6-11 minutes, and 25.5 percent within 11 minutes-an hour.
    These chilling numbers raise the question, “what can happen in the first 5 minutes?” Very likely, the victim would have already been beaten or robbed, perhaps killed, by the time police are able to arrive. I ask you to examine this next set of data, conducted by the compiled for the FBI's "Crime in the US" report.(11) This shows the number of homicides deemed justifiable by the law. However, I ask that you look again at the text at the bottom of the table. It reads, “The killing of a felon, during the commission of a felony, by a private citizen.” These numbers represent real, law-abiding citizens who only used their firearms to stop someone bent on taking their life. As citizens of the United States,(12) we have the right to protect our lives and property. Not everyone chooses be armed, but proponents of concealed carry advocate the choice to do so if one wishes, as well as to not be judged for their decision to defend themselves.


    Gun Free Zones


    Although most states do allow some form of carry, places called “gun-free zones” were established with the Crime Control Act of 1990. In such zones, the law requires citizens to disarm before entering the premises. Some examples of gun-free zones are; government buildings such as post offices and capitol buildings; public events like state fairs and sports events, elementary and secondary schools. This prevents (13) teachers from carrying licensed firearms in case of an emergency. The phrase “going postal” has been popularized in American slang, but has a deadly origin. The phrase is derived from at least 20 workplace rage incidents at post offices from 1983 onward. These are all cases in which postal workers have shot and killed their managers, fellow workers, and members of the police or general public. Most university and college regulations also prohibit carrying concealed weapons on campus.
    The problem with areas such as this is that only those who obey the law will disarm. An individual seeking to do harm will enter such an area with the comforting knowledge that encountering armed opposition will be unlikely. The lack of rationality by lawmakers in this department has had fatal consequences over the years.


    Columbine and Virginia Tech


    Two schools in particular suffered from the flawed logic of gun-free zones. The Columbine High School and Virginia Tech University Massacres are the two worst school shootings in US history. The 1999 Columbine Massacre, lasting less than an hour, resulted in thirteen people killed and 24 wounded at the hands of Harris and Klebold. Since high schools are gun free zones, there were no armed teachers or administrators who may have been able to stop the duo’s terrible actions. Seung-Hui Cho, the perpetrator of the 2007 Virginia Tech Massacre, killed 33 people singlehandedly, injuring an additional 23. His rampage lasted from 7:15am to 5:30pm.(14) The reason he was able to roam the campus indiscriminately murdering innocent people for over 10 hours is that all of his victims were defenseless. Ken Stanton, a columnist for Virginia Tech’s Collegiate Times, Virginia Tech student, and administrator of the Students for Conceal Carry on Campus organization, told me that he estimates there are between 300-400 concealed carry permit holders who attend Virginia Tech. All it would have taken was one armed citizen and Cho’s wanton disregard for human life would have ended much sooner than ten hours (14), with a significantly lower death toll. Teachers at Columbine and students at Virginia Tech should not have been denied the ability to shoot these murderers to prevent them from spilling more blood. Instead, they had to wait until the violent murderers shot themselves for the carnage to end.
    Universities continue to be one of the gravest areas of concern, since unlike workplaces and government buildings; they are independently operated and highly public places. As opposed to high schools, college students over 21 are of age to carry, and many already hold permits to do so. However, due to senseless regulations enacted by universities, they are prohibited from having the means to defend themselves at any given time.


    Guns on Campuses


    The opponents to campus carry have an endless array of arguments against students carrying their legally licensed weapons at school. Let’s take a look at some of their favorite contentions:



    Guns on campus would lead to an escalation of crime:

    Carrying concealed weapons on campus has been permitted since fall 2006 at 20 campuses of nine public colleges in Utah, Colorado State University since 2003, and at the Blue Ridge Community College since 1996. With concealed carry allowed on these campuses for a combined total of 100 semesters, none of these schools has experienced a single incident of gun violence or accidents. Similarly, none of the state which permit carrying has seen an increase in gun violence since legalizing concealed carry, even though carriers wear their guns in places such as food stores, movie theaters, office buildings, shopping malls, churches, restaurants and banks. Furthermore, studies done at by University of Maryland professor John Lott and University of Georgia professor David Mustard, as well as those done by various state agencies, show that concealed license holders are five times less likely than non-license holders to commit violent crimes.


    A student with a gun could “snap” and go on a killing spree:

    According to a report by the Secret Service National Threat Assessment Center on the prevention of targeted violence in schools, the notion of a previously sane, well-adjusted person “snapping” into a violent frenzy is not supported by case evidence. The study concluded that a person’s descent towards violent acts is typically accompanied with numerous warning signs.


    Conclusion


    Most citizens who choose to carry a handgun are the opposite of wild, dangerous people. They are shown statistically to be more level headed than non-carrying people, and have proven this is practical terms by keeping their handguns on them every day, not using them unless they feel their lives are in immediate jeopardy. People who carry have a positive impact on their communities, not because they go looking for criminals trying to be police, but because they go about their day prepared to respond to those who may intend to do them harm. They do this despite the fact that the population at large views them as crazy or paranoid.(15) It would have been a blessing to have had an armed /civilian/ person at Virginia Tech or Fort Hood, (16) or in any of the thousands of store robberies where clerks are killed each year. The presence of a private citizen with a handgun may not help stop violence 100% of the time, but there has never been a case where it hurt. (17)Those of you who do not carry a gun should be thankful that there are people willing to shoulder that responsibility. If there is ever a day where you find yourself face to face with a criminal, sever seconds away from death, a good guy with a gun nearby can’t help but increase your chance to survive.


    As a professional editor*, my edits/thoughts/suggestions:

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    (1) What B Bill said. Whose statistics? Please cite. I am sure the North American Man-Boy Love Association (:ar15:NAMBLA :biggun: ) can come up with some "statistics" showing us why we should all be sodomizing young boys as early and as often as possible, but somehow I don't think they would sway very many people's opinion on the issue.

    (2) A simple domestic violence charge is a misdemeanor, not a felony. As much as I despise wife-beaters and think they should sentenced to a taste of their own medicine :bat: , the Lautenberg amendment has set, and the Supreme Court has allowed to stand, a dangerous precedent in allowing misdemeanor crimes to deprive basic civil rights.

    (3) 2 states are being discussed, so I have re-worded this as appropriate.
    "Handed out" gives the wrong impression to the sheeple that CCW/LTCH's are given out like free food samples at Costco. Issued sounds better, IMHO.

    (4) The info was gathered for the Report, the Report did not conduct the research for itself.

    (5) "made" is past tense so "had" is unnecessary.

    (6) Name of the study?

    (7) What a.bentonab said...you need a noun "robber/criminal/etc." to go here to make it grammatically correct.

    (8) The "legislature" is the body of government that makes the laws AKA the resulting "legislation".

    (9) Why is it important? Please explain...
    "that" seems unneeded out/of place here.

    (10) Same as the others..what report? What is its name?

    (11) Same as (4) the Report, as an inanimate object, did not conduct the research to include in its own pages.

    (12) I would suggest that as sentient human beings we ALL have this inate right of self-defense.

    (13) This is a bit of a run-on sentence. Since the sentence begins "Some examples..." the list of mass murder-enablement zones and the inevitable result of such policies should be in seperate sentences.

    (14) According to Wikipedia:
    9:51 a.m.: As the police reached the second floor, the gunshots stopped. Cho's shooting spree in Norris Hall lasted 9 minutes.[59] Police officers discovered that after his second round of shooting the occupants of room 211 Norris, the gunman fatally shot himself in the temple.[9][60]

    = a little over 2.5 hours, not 10 hours

    (15) I would reword this. At a minimum I would say "some", not "a majority"...no need to reinforce the factually incorrect image of CCers that we are fighting against.

    (16) Many/most of the killed at Fort Hood were U.S. soldiers (by definition any one that is not a member of a military is a "civilians", even LEO's), so I think "person" is a better word to use here.

    (17) Universal statements are almost* ;) universally bad because even one exception invalidates the statement. I am sure the Brady bunch can find at least one case where some old lady had her pistol taken away from her and used to murder her. Surely you cannot know the outcome of ALL cases where a handgun has been used for/present in a self defense situation, so I would avoid statements like this.



    I normally get paid quite well to do this as my full-time job for a major global financial services firm. As my 'fee', how about firing off a "pay it forward" payment to Fenway to support :ingo:!


    * any tiepo's found in my text are a manifestation of the Evil Spirit that lifes in my keeboard, and are not to be taken as a sine of professhunal incompahtince on my part! ;)
     
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    Bushido's comments bring something to mind. Although you didn't list your citations, never, never ever use Wiki anything as a source for academic papers, unless it is a course in fiction.
     

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    As opposed to high schools, college students over 21 are of age to carry, and many already hold permits to do so.

    In Indiana the age to carry with a LTCH is is 18, not 21.

    Also, I used to work with Ron Honeycutt. He had gone to deliver at Pizza Hut after a disagreement with our management. But I saw him after the incident and he had been fired for carrying at work. So you could see if you could find that in the papers somewhere so you have a citable source in opposed to "some guy on the internet."

    Also, you could talk about the information found here. Maybe even go to kinkos, print some off and hand em out. It depends on the type of class/speech this is. Some teachers love stuff.

    right click -> save as
    http://www.indyhpmedia.com/ihpmedia/pics/Indecision/Random/NoGunsNoMoney.pdf

    Also, if you are feeling ballsy and want to show how many people carry every day that they have no clue about, wear a blue gun in an IWB holster and demonstrate that "you never know who's carrying."

    Blueguns - Train Safe & Train Smart
     

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    Thanks bushido, all those revisions are amazingly helpful. I'll get right on making those changes. I need to insert citations throughout the entire thing, too.

    Indecision, I got the info about Honeycutt from an Indy Star article. The same article contained the information about Floyd. Also, I was already thinking about wearing an airsoft glock (with orange tip) to show at the end of the speech. A blue gun would be better, I'll see if I can get one in time for the speech.
     

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    I've given this speech in several classes, and in all instances classmates have told me that they now considered the issue of handgun carrying in a new light. Many thanks to all who contributed and supported it!
     
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