Patriot Dawn: The Resistance Rises by Max Velocity

[Beorn]

Free today (11/23) and tomorrow.

Amazon.com: Patriot Dawn: The Resistance Rises eBook: Max Velocity: Kindle Store

 

[jedi]

thanks!

 

[stormryder]

Any other books?

 

[Throwsstones]

Thanks

 

[voodoo304]

Got it, Thank you!

 

[dirtfarmerz]

Thanks

 

[Stubz]

Thanks for the heads up!

 

[netsecurity]

Yea, thanks, looks interesting.

 

[dprimm]

Thanks! I was going to ILL it. This is better.

 

[salemons]

Just saw this thread. Look like I missed it.

 

[Dave A]

I finished reading it this afternoon. It is a very good read, a lot of action. I'll look forward to part II.

 

[BrinNutz]

It's a good story, though I don't know how it made it to print. Tons of grammatical errors throughout the book, and there were way too many times that made me go, "Why is he repeating this, he already explained this earlier in the book" when explaining how something worked, what it's use was, etc.

Even with that, I'll read the sequel if it's free...Like I said, the story line has me hooked.

 

[spencer rifle]

^^ This. Character development was weak and didn't give me much reason to care about them. It seemed more like a military how-to manual than an engaging story. This guy really loves his military acronyms. There were several instance of deus ex machina and I'm not clear how they got all that military hardware. Still, I'll also read the sequel if I don't have to pay for it.

 

[cobber]

He doesn't respond well to criticism of his 'book'. It is dry, and not well-written. Don't dare rain on his parade in a neg review, or he and his fan-boys (and girls) will go after you hammer and tongs.

If you scan some of his other work, he tends to ramble and go off-topic, never to return.

I suppose it's worth a read, but rather predictable.



I would like to see a SHTF book from the 'other side'... Any of those on the market? Or the stories of the totally unprepared... I think you can actually employ the bad guys to tell the same story.